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Chpt. 1 of Hannahs Help by ~rachaelprower34:iconrachaelprower34:



        Same walked down the street in her everyday stride of hurry and hush. It was not safe here and she knew that there was no way for her to escape the things she was forced to deal with everyday of her life. Not things like Alex and Lindsay had to deal with but her own things stuff that no one should have to deal with at all these where the things that the teacher knew nothing about.
           When she reached her street she turned down it, in the dark it made it look even scarier than it honestly was. This was now her home and this was where she was to escape from. It was too late to do planning now but every night she thought of what she would do to escape her dad and without Elizabeth she was on her own and that the way it would be.
    Over the next week, Same kept walking her dark path to and from her work she needed help. Help from someone who would understand this was to be help from one who knows exactly what she was going through when she walked through the door she needed help from Hannah.
©2007-2009 ~rachaelprower34
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This is just a new story I was writing and i didnt have time to transfer my other file so this is all I have so far I will submit chpt. 2 soon
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I'm glad more people are submitting deviant literature :)

"she knew that there was no way for her to escape the things she was forced to deal with everyday of her life."

I really like this line

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lolz thanks I really wish I wouldnt have submited though I suck at writing and am toatally embarrased about this particular story...

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:iconoli-86:
Don't worry, you'll get better its a matter of practice as well. if you need any help with something just ask.

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OKAYZ! thank you:hug:

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It's the end here today...
But I will build a new begining
Take some time,Find a place
And I will start a new religeon
One where God is involved
:kitty::kitty::kitty::kitty::kitty::kitty::kitty::kitty: Hello Kitty Is greater then :star:'s
:iconoli-86:
Your welcome :)

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Ordinary Morality is for Ordinary People!
:iconrachaelprower34:
I am trying to make new friends it is four in the morning and I think i was just blinded by a flashlight maybe i should ask for help now hehe!

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It's the end here today...
But I will build a new begining
Take some time,Find a place
And I will start a new religeon
One where God is involved
:kitty::kitty::kitty::kitty::kitty::kitty::kitty::kitty: Hello Kitty Is greater then :star:'s
:iconoli-86:
someone gave you a fright ? what are you doing still awake :p, (well i end up not sleeping most of the time too like yesterday i was up till 5 am then i woke up today at 9

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Ordinary Morality is for Ordinary People!
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no I just had a bad dream so i woke up at like 2 in the morn and came to watch ppl on here and hope they watch me back:D hehe

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It's the end here today...
But I will build a new begining
Take some time,Find a place
And I will start a new religeon
One where God is involved
:kitty::kitty::kitty::kitty::kitty::kitty::kitty::kitty: Hello Kitty Is greater then :star:'s
:iconoli-86:
lol, Try channeling your bad dreams into a story :P

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